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Thinking Of Him Again by ~ErialosaText:iconErialosaText:



Tracing the horizon on the window
with my fingertips
Looking out at the dark sky
softly hit the mountain tops
Dreaming of all the places
that I have never been
Hoping that someday
this longing will come to an end
Wondering if he is out there
somewhere thinking of me
Wishing the love I hold, he could see
If only I could be in his arms just once
That moment I have waited for
far too many months
The soft night sky reminds me of his eyes
The emptiness of the land
reminds me of the way he never said good-bye
Wishing that I could rid
of this dwelling in my heart
Knowing that our souls will never part

Written By:
Ashley Lynn
March 2003©
©2007-2010 ~ErialosaText
:iconerialosatext:

Author's Comments

Will be published in a coffee-table quality hardbound volume titled "Immortal Verses" from Poetry.com under the name Ashley Lynn Thomas.

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:iconsorrows-song:
Usually I don't like love poems.
They're too overdone, and they all sound the same in general.
I really liked this one though.
It's actually kind of right where I feel I am with this guy.
The imagery was soothing.
Thanks for sharing, write on. :heart:

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“We are all broken and wounded in this world. Some choose to grow strong at the broken places.”
- Harold J. Duarte-Bernhardt
:iconerialosatext:
Thanks very much.
That truly means a lot.
I am glad that you enjoyed it,
And I'm glad you we're able to relate.
:hug: :heart:

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Feel free to also check out my other :gallery: page ~Erialosa :heart:
And for all of you wonderful writer's out there, please be sure to stop by ~Irie-Scribe
(\ /) Sincerely,
( . .) Ashley Lynn
c(")(") @~}~~
:iconsorrows-song:
You're welcome. It was truly good. :D

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“We are all broken and wounded in this world. Some choose to grow strong at the broken places.”
- Harold J. Duarte-Bernhardt
:icongemmfyre666:
this is awesome =)
when i get the chance will try and get through your entire gallery =)

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:iconerialosatext:
Thanks very much. And thanks for the :+fav:! :D :glomp:

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Feel free to also check out my other :gallery: page ~Erialosa :heart:
And for all of you wonderful writer's out there, please be sure to stop by ~Irie-Scribe
(\ /) Sincerely,
( . .) Ashley Lynn
c(")(") @~}~~
:icongemmfyre666:
you are very welcome :D :glomp:

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Offical Pill Giver
Drowning Pool Maintenance Person
DAA Registered Visitor Badge # 8.
You Don't need to be crazy to work there but it sure helps

Offical Finder Of People For Nico To :spank:
:iconalcedo-susurrus:
An excellent job on weaving the emotion into the lines and tone, making it a realistic and not sickeningly sweet or heart wrenching love poem; which have almost become overdone and cliché. I really enjoyed it and congratulations on having it published.
:iconerialosatext:
Much thanks for the comment and taking interest. I enjoy reading what others think. This one is probably one of my :+fav:s of my own. It is one of those, that every time I read it, I fall back into that exact moment.

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Feel free to also check out my other :gallery: page ~Erialosa :heart:
And for all of you wonderful writer's out there, please be sure to stop by ~Irie-Scribe
(\ /) Sincerely,
( . .) Ashley Lynn
c(")(") @~}~~
:iconmeeden:
a truly touching love poem - wonderfully written :butterfly:

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